Feedback:
- Text stands out well. Title is bold and stands out against background.
- Mention of free poster is harder to see on hand. Maybe make it bolder if possible.
- Film world could be bigger or stretch it across the screen. Spread across the page. Add colour block along the time and put the tag line there.
- Move the puff out more into the image so it doesn't blend with the image. Move left so its not over characters face.
- Move the plus down so it fits in with the bullet points.
- Needs month or issue number for added information for readers.
- Have the M and W different colour or font to create a brand identity for this magazine.
- Photo has good lighting and the gradient from black to white works well as the photo has a white glow around.
- Put Six String and liberty closer together as to not distract attention away from advertsisng the magazine through its title and slogan.
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Produced by Stephen Norman
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