Our Feedback from the class in reaction to this animatic was:
Things that were good:
- The film had good continuity, where the plot was easy to understand of an individual trying to reach the top of his profession, starting from the bottom and working his way up.
- A musical genre was conveyed well through the use of props, such as a guitar and microphone.
- Music suited the trailer; was dramatic which helped suit the times when the character was within hard times during certain moments of the trailer.
Things that could be improved:
- The way in which fame was portrayed did not convince the viewers that the individual had become a celebrity icon in the latter stages of the trailer.
- Locations could be elaborated on, perhaps using a more musical environment such as a recording studio.
- The inclusion of at least one adult actor to convince viewers that the individual is working in a professional business environment, when trying to secure a record deal.
Roles:
Animatic Produced by: Stephen Norman and Luke Payne
Feedback Produced by: Stephen Norman
Uploaded by: Stephen Norman
Can you add to this post what the feedback was for this animatic or do it in a separate post? If you wanted to show the video to another group as the previous video was lost, you could do that.
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